wyslet's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Vending Machine Cartoon]

Well Im going to disagree with every one else and say that I did not predict the beginning, at least not all of it. I thought he might lose his finger or something, but watching him get entirely sucked in was pretty funny to me.

I thought the end was more predictable, especially on newgrounds where you can almost guarantee that if it made the front page it has a lot of A. Profanity B. Gore C. Sexual Themes D. A combo of all the above.

I think it would have been funnier if after the kid put in the change the guy crawls out of the machine with a beard and a candy bar, mumbling to himself or something.

But maybe thats just me. Either way, you did a great job with the music, animation, and idea. Something tells me you already knew that.

Emrox responds:

Hey, thanks!

[NEW LIFE- English version]

Unbelievable

This is exactly how 'i feel right now. 6 days ago I was in an accident. i was T-boned and almost lost my life, every one that saw it thought i was dead after I was knocked out. But I know God had something in for me when I was pulled out of the crumpled mess with only a broken femur. In the days that followed, and still now I am living uncomfertable, at least recently i was able to go home. Life is 100 times harder than it was before... Going to the bathroom leaves me gasping for air. The only thing I can keep on doing is breathing, and living. i never thought that life would be so tough, but I realize how lucky I got.

i have never cried while watching an animation, but I couldn't help myself after watching this one. You are a great story teller, and I hope you are able to read this and just know how much you have affected me, i know you put unimaginable amounts of work into this.

Thank you
-bob

SOMNAMBULA responds:

i have a terrible car accident which was happend with me last week
so i understand you on 100%

[Time in a Bottle]

great job

nine stars, probably 9.5 really haha, but theres no such thing as a ten. mmm, to be honest, i thought it got a liiiiittle boring, kind of repetative, although there really isnt much you could do about it. I guess I might like this flash a little more than i would normally cuz I just got broke up with, but thats another story.

I would also like to say, I looove this song, this is one of the first songs me and my Dad learned to play on guitar together.

Gate-keeper-girl responds:

Oo lucky, I can only play piano XD

[SummerShorts]

nice job

good animations, good voice acting, fair jokes. good all around. some of it was a little cliche, but nonethe less it was funny. not really funny...buy funny. kind of like....lolz funny, but not haha! funny....if that made sence.

lolz

by the way, I love it when people grade low because they dont like it under the bases that "no one thinks it is funny" even though if you look at the ave score its like 8.7 or whatever.

I also love it when people post whatever is on there minds in a comment that has absolutely nothing to do with the animation. Im sure the artists really appreciate it too.

lolz again.

itsjms responds:

Thanks alot. Just some parts might have not been your sence of humor. I liked your review ^^.

[Shame by the Slice 2]

really good

this flash is really good, high quality, that stuff, but its just not that funny. some of it would be funnier but there is something a little...off with the voice acting. its like..I dunno, hard to explain, but it made some of the jokes not funny. funniest part ever was the street fighter reference, right after it ended and the kid (dont remember name) still said whatever it was....any ways...dont know if that make sence but...i thought that part was funny.

peace up a tree

BaconMask responds:

I agree, I kinda overreached in some of the voices. It's hard to get the inflection juuuust right. Derek and Jeff nailed it every time, but I re-recorded a lot... and just had trouble selling some. I have a ton of freinds who I'm gonna give a chance on the mic.

Thanks for watching and reviewing!

[Growing Old]

well

you did a good job with this, but what you need is music bro....it would be 10 times better with a loop going in the backround. it would make the style look less lazy, and like it was actually what you were going for...ADD MUSIC MAN!

Synnxile responds:

i knew it was kinda plain as it was playin' through, and i thought about addin' some music in the background. i just didn't know what i could put.. but thx for lettin' me know.

[Eyeballoon]

haha nice

didnt know what to expect at first, but this is really funny. good job, i hope it makes front page. The only error I noticed, when the guy falls back to earth he still has both eyes right before he hits the ground. Anyway, good job, this is what a real flash looks like.

boinky33 responds:

That isn't an error. I meant for that to be.

["the city" (2006)]

"You read my mind"

this was sick. I mean, you are a disgusting man. A disgusting man I find hilarious haha, this is probably one of the funnies flash cartoons I have seen in a while. I dont even know why I think its funny, does that make me sick? ahha...probably. Now that I have seen two of your other flash I like half merman better, now I understand your style more and your jokes as well. keep up the funny stuff!

JeremyLokken responds:

Thanks for your review and for watching more than one of my cartoons! Much appreciated.

[Oxygen]

Into my favorites!

Holy cow, you basicly mobbed this flash! The music was perfect, animation, perfect! good mixture between film and animation, I have used a mixture myself, but with an entirely different style. You can view it if you like, but it is not very good. anyway, you did extraordinary! Keep it up! All my 5.

notorious responds:

Thanks for the good review!

[Narv]

weeeee..

it was pretty intence, I like your usage of crayons and pen and whatnot. I didnt like the picture place though...it might just be me, but I dont like to see pictures in flash. any way, it was worth however long it was. good job!

sysrq868 responds:

Your kind words and criticism are both appreciated! :)

Thanks for the review!
-- sysrq868